Site Meter The Book Stacks » Blog Archive » Bernadette Steele and Creating Clues in a Cozy Mystery

Bernadette Steele and Creating Clues in a Cozy Mystery

by JM

marblebookends.jpgAll novels have characters, setting, and plot but only the mystery has clues. In order to make the clues more appetizing to the reader, writers need to inject a certain degree of foreshadowing and red herrings to accompany their clues.

Foreshadowing is simply the writer’s way of hinting to the reader that something usual is about to occur. The weather, time of day, character names or the decay of an object can all be used to foreshadow the events yet to come in a novel.

Red herrings are well placed distractions for the reader. In a mystery, the sleuth will often think that she has found a clue but it is in fact a red herring meant to provide misdirection.

Unlike foreshadowing and red herrings, clues are facts that will lead to the solution of the cozy mystery puzzle. Clues can come from the following sources:

• Character – The characters’ behavior, circumstances, lies and truth can all generate clues for the reader.

• People’s secret lives – Everyone has a secret in a mystery and these secrets can either individually or combined serve as a clue.

• Relationships – The origin or purpose of a particular relationship can be a clue. When deciding on which relationships to use as clues, remember that the character with the clearest motive is never the murderer and the least likely suspect is also never the murderer.

• The body – This is where the forensic information comes into play. The smallest item on the body like a speck of lint could be a clue or even how the victim was dressed when the body was discovered.

• Dialog – When characters talk to each other, sometimes what they don’t say can be a clue just a much as what they actually say. This can also take the form of a conversation being overheard.

• The scene of the crime – There may be something that the murderer takes with him or leaves behind.

• The missing item – This could be an item that would normally be there but is now missing such as a light bulb in a lamp, contact lenses solution and etc.
When deciding on your clues, remember to be selective and to be fair with your readers. You want to tease them but you don’t want to insult them or frustrate them too much.


4 Responses to “Bernadette Steele and Creating Clues in a Cozy Mystery”

  1. Cheryl Malandrinos Says:

    I love this post! I enjoy reading mysteries, but I doubt I could ever write one. I tend to drop too many clues too early.

    Best of luck with the rest of the tour.

    Cheryl

  2. JM Says:

    I’m the same way, Cheryl. :) Thanks for stopping by.

  3. Bernadette Steele Says:

    Hello,

    I would like to thank the host of The Book Stacks for being a stop on my virtual book tour.

    Also, I would like to invite readers to post comments or to ask questions. I will be checking the site throughout the month.

    Sincerely,
    Bernadette Steele

  4. Fiction Scribe » Blog Archive » Guest Authors at The Book Stacks Says:

    [...] *Bernadette Steele, The Poetry of Murder, on creating clues in a cozy mystery. [...]

Leave a Reply


About The Book Stacks

The Book Stacks is the place to go for everything book-related. Here you will find librarian humor, books that are moving to the big screen, cover art, random trivia, reviews, news, games, videos, the occasional interview, and anything else I run across. What are you reading? Have a favorite book? Let me know.

The Book Stacks Author(s)
    » JM

Blogging Flair

Books & Writing Channel Posts

  • Interview with 'Heart of Diamonds' Author Dave Donelson
    Hello and welcome to Fiction Scribe Mr. Donelson! Thanks, it's great to be here. Tell us a bit about you – where you’ve been, how you got here, where you’re going. I'm a full-time [...]
  • Book Review: Sam’s Quest Book 2: The Royal Trident by Ben Furman
    Reeling from the mysterious and sudden deaths of her parents, Samantha Mae Costas is trying to keep it all together. Between moving all of her things from New York to Mile High Mountain with Grandpa [...]
  • New Fiction Books to Add to the Wish List
    Lots of promising fiction books have been released recently, just in time for Christmas shopping. In addition to Wally Lamb's The Hour I First Believed, which I think everyone knows I am super [...]
  • It's Like This and It's Like That
    The further into Love Walked In by Marisa de los Santos, the more I want to compare it to Dear Catastrophe Waitress by Brendan Halpin. I enjoyed Waitress, and am equally enjoying Love. Both are grand [...]
  • Booking Through Thursday - Honesty
    Wow! My suggestion went up on Booking Through Thursday. :) I feel very honored. The prompt: "I receive a lot of review books, but I have never once told lies about the book just because I got a [...]
  • NaNoWriMo Check-In – Day 20
    I found an absolutely hilarious NaNoWriMo calendar you should check out. Why? It's titled: NaNoWriMo - It's Like Being in a Cult Without the Free Robes Not only does it have a daily minimum word [...]
  • Thursday Thirteen Writing Prompts
    Hello and happy Thursday Thirteen, all. As per usual, I will be giving you a list of thirteen prompts in all shapes and sizes. They could be a first line of dialogue, a plot idea, or something [...]
  • Random Word Bank Wednesday
    Hello once again everyone! Welcome to another mid-week random word bank. I rather like random word banks. There is a challenge in them that not only gets your mind working, but you can also end up [...]
  • Book Spotlight: Blackbird, Farewell by Robert Greer
    Shandell “Blackbird” Bird has everything going for him, or so he thinks. Recently selected number two overall in the NBA draft, the six foot eight, 250-pound superstar has a gleaming new ride and [...]
  • Avoidance Tactics
    Okay. The house is quiet – as quiet as it will ever get, anyway – and it’s time to write. No distractions, just pure writing time. Pure writing time that you have been waiting for so long. Now [...]

Hot Off The Press